Hello there! ^^ RCorona said you need some criticism, well which art yah? Let me take a look. By the way my name is Ray. If you watch me I'll watch you back later.

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[ AR-3 My Expression... ]

Well Hex pretty much took the words right out of my mouth there lol

You really do have a lot of creativity and a good imagination there please keep nurturing it there's no telling how far it'll take you.

Stay at it and keep practicing your with your skills and style and you'll be fine.

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The Arcana is the means by which all is revealed...Attaining ones dream requires a stern will and unfailing determination.

said that you needed some friendly constructive criticism XD

well, from what i see, i say your a very competent artist. your pretty developed in your style, and that's good, and you have a lot of creativity.

if there was a few aspects i could suggest needed some work, would be hands. there are some really good tutorials around here on DA and on the rest of the internet on various anatomy, and that might be good for you to.

the thing about drawing manga, or any cartoon style, is that you should know learn how to draw under muscles of natural humans (because any kind of cartoon can get kind of crazy). there are a lot of books, one in specific (i forget the name of it) was an encyclopedia on the human muscle structures, bone locations, and the like.

well, hope that helped

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Takka boojee-bu
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thank you loved one